Wednesday, February 6, 2013

My hand ached



My hand ached

Writing this letter

This very last time

Breathing the air that was not mine

Under the sky that was only yours

to me it was black

It pains me writing this letter

While cutting my heart in pieces

For the last time for you to see

But alas, not to feel

Your closed hearts doing

It pains me to see the heart locket

I had carved for you from my soul

buried in a corner close to

What used to be nothing for you

marks of uncaring fingers

how dirt covered it deep

it pains me to see how my writing

never enters your heart

how you always are the one

not bleeding from my wounds.
                                     p.k 
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    Dear Nanda, Thanks for your comment! :) I am glad you liked the last lines. I posted My hand ached part 2! :) right now. I would love to see what you think. Please feel free to give me your feedback and again thanks for stopping by. :)

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