My hand ached
Writing this letter
This very last time
Breathing the air that was not mine
Under the sky that was only yours
to me it was black
It pains me writing this letter
While cutting my heart in pieces
For the last time for you to see
But alas, not to feel
Your closed hearts doing
It pains me to see the heart locket
I had carved for you from my soul
buried in a corner close to
What used to be nothing for you
marks of uncaring fingers
how dirt covered it deep
it pains me to see how my writing
never enters your heart
how you always are the one
not bleeding from my wounds.
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Copyright © 2013 Parissa Khosh
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Copyright © 2013 Parissa Khosh
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